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October 21, 2013

Maskerada: Nearing Humiliation (Series 4)

Maskerada is in severe peril now! Eight comments could reveal some of her most precious secrets... getting us even closer for her ultimate defeat -- the removal of her tempting mask!!

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Mr.S. had all but exposed her womanhood and now the brute had untied the string to her bikini top. Maskerada was totally consumed with panic now, writhing wildly in her chair, straining against her bonds. Her masked head rolled back and forth in terror at her plight!

"No, Mr.S., don't do this to me. Dear god, don't!"

Her captor stepped back and savored the almost nude body of his arch enemy, the frenzy of dismay he had worked her into. Feeling the flush of his victory, he took a Flor de las Antillas Toro cigar from his coat that he had been saving for just for this occasion, and lit it, blowing a thick blue cloud of smoke at his helpless captive. "Ha! The great Maskerada, champion of law and order! Now I've almost got you stripped and exposed for my viewing pleasure! Who would've known you would be so simple to conquer!"

Maskarada glared at him, her eyes filled with hate and loathing for this fiend who had her at his mercy. "You'll never defeat me," she spat, "Not the real me! Not really!"

"Maybe not Masked Maiden, But I'll have the next thing: Your secret identity and your defenseless body!"

Mr. S. slowly moved closer and to her left side. The heroine felt menaced, intimidated. She struggled not to show it, but she was barely holding the panic back.

"You should try not to breathe quite so deeply, my sweet," he whispered in her ear, his breath reeking of smoke. "Each time you do, the cup covering this breast slips down just a bit more." Maskerada blushed beneath her mask. She was so vulnerable to him... and there was nothing she could do,"

"S., I - I'm begging you... please, torture me any other way, kill me if you must. But please..." her voice was whisper now. "...Please, leave me my dignity. I couldn't bear it if you... if you..." Tears filled her eyes. She was unable to finish her sentence.

"Why, that touches my heart, it really does. You're an old fashioned girl, aren't you?" Maskerada looked down. Well, my little prude... we certainly have to ween you of that!"

His hand began inching toward the back of her neck. "And now 'modest Maskerada,' let's just have a look at that magnificent chest of yours!" Wildly, Maskerada squirmed in horror to get away! "Oh don't be shy, beautiful! Soon everyone will get to see them!"



11 comments:

  1. Good teasing from the script. And well framed shots! Looking forward to the next part! The teasing is perfect

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  2. Indeed, good teasing! LOVE this line:
    "Maskerada blushed beneath her mask. She was so vulnerable to him... and there was nothing she could do,"
    I agree with one of the previous comments about no nudity - for me, I just want bare feet and a bare face!! everything else is distracting.
    another idea I don't think I've really seen any other unmaskings - I'd like to see/read more of her thoughts during the whole process. Who is she MOST afraid of being exposed to? family? friends? criminals she has captured previously? her picture on the front of the paper? what about her physical condition? is she nervous? sick to her stomach?
    (food for thought, I guess)
    keep them coming!!
    (BatmanUnmasked)

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  3. I don't see how nudity is distracting. As long as there is a focus on unmasking any other fetishes hit are fine too

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  4. This is a good first attempt at an Erotic Unmasking photo shoot. But, I must say the character needs a little more work. If she was submissive or vuluerable...she would have a worried look. Her mouth would not be closed as this injustice is done to her. In these shots, Maskerada seems to enjoy Mr. S. undoing her bikini.

    I know, my wife loves when I do naughty things to her...but when it's roll playing time...it's good to Role Play. I think it's a good first attempt...but do pay attention to her facial expression underneath the mask. We can still see her mouth and eyes...so, make them look a bit terrified, afriad, angry, upset, shock...

    This is just my 2 cents. Right now...it still looks like a man doing something to a woman who seems to enjoy the kinky foreplay. I know Mr. S and Maskerada can make this a unique unmasking fantasy.

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  5. I'm feeling a little sad about Maskerada's fate....!

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    1. Now how are you going to be an unmasking super villain with that kind of attitude? ;)

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  6. And I know we all want to see it!

    (from Medium 2)

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  7. Love ALL of this Keep it coming! And i too agree... the nudity in NOT distracting. Unmasking the BODS after the face is a lovely cherry to the top of the sunday! If Maskerada and Mr. S want to then............................The roaring and applause! :-)

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  8. To me the look on Maskerada's isn't exactly one of enjoyment. More like glowering at the photographer and "can we get this over with please?" But the mask does leave room for interpretation.

    But my main comment is to put in a word for the viewpoint of the pictures. There have been a couple of suggestions that it would be better if you could see Mr.S. there terrorizing our heroine, and I totally agree with that. But at least for this one I kind of enjoy him holding the camera while doing dreadful things to Maskerada. It's kind of like a 'First Person Unmasker' game! :-)

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  9. I agree. The first person view is a great touch. It allows the focus on the model while still providing some context for the unmasking

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